Go to The Obscurian and read my Harris Burdick window story.
You know you want to. Take note of the tiny text, when I pasted it in it pasted too wide. Blah, blah, blah. The formatting kind of sucks on this thing.
Please read it.
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Cram me full of Truth and Ugly- so wiggerless wireless that it hurts- it's Life in spurts.
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Please furnish a link, if you would. Many thanks.
Look along the side and click on "Oz", you will find a link at the bottom.
Twas a sad, little half-verse kind of strangeness. Bleak can be fun indeed but please, don't take this wrong. Some words used repeatedly, can distract us from the beauty of the thing. Perhaps it was purposeful but the I, I, I, They, They, They bits were a bit cumbersome. Perhaps toss us some variant descriptive words to describe goo, too. I like goo and I think there should be more of it, and more people turning into it.
Keep up the good work, apocalypse-girl.
El Swastifix,
The verse formatting was all because of the crap formatting on this here blog site. I wrote it in traditional paragraph style, so the repeating I's and They's aren't as obnoxious. I think I might work on it more, expand it a bit, like you did with your pugilist crime fiction. I appreciate your honest critism, most of the comments end up just being about how much someone likes something. It's nice, but not too helpful. So thank you sir for some useful information.
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